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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:02 am
  

The Name Of The Lily Of The Valley
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:19 am
  

I feel I need to amend one sentence. A poet, when he writes, he must not forget about what anyone feels and sees and believes etc. He must feel that and remember that all the time. But he just mustn't write about it. Yes, now it's much better. Though, I feel that still not good enough. I do feel there is still something more to add on that matter. So, it really is quite cool, but not good. But what the heck. Once they wrote a good book, they wrote the Bible and you all see the results.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:42 am
  

Ceashel, I think there is one thing you need to know about me. I did not like your tone because it sounded to me like nun's. If you met as many nuns as I have, you would understand. Or perhaps it's the other way round. There was a period in my life, that I was meeting actually almost not anyone but nuns. Well, it was the other way round. They were males. Well... is it a good word to call a priest? In a way, yes. In another way, no. In even another way, it is. I will tell you of the third way. So, they did things, and they spoke that tone. That tone I clearly recognized seeing it in your words. They, they prayed. They knelt. And you know what? they pitied. It was quite long ago. Very long ago, it was. But somehow, I still very do not want them to touch my poetry.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:52 am
  

He took from her what was never hers, so she killed him.

Rules are a strange candy. They taste best when you don't taste them.

I really don’t mind
that they delete poems.
I just think
that they should read them first.
(in my book, it won't be -delete but -don't like

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:04 am
  

There is one more thing for me to tell you here. All the thoughts I wrote are mine. I conceived them live. Except the one of Bukowski I quoted. Also, when I am going to quote someone else than myself, I will mark that it is a quote.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:17 am
  

Don't pay attention to my latest 3 (or some) posts. Read the Name Of The Lily Of The Valley. To dosturb you no more, I will post anything more here no sooner that someone reads it and makes a comment. Or in a few days.


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 7:31 am
  

I will disturb. I often change my mind. But somehow I have many friends and... just kidding. I have three. What it means to have 3 friends, knows only the one, who has... one.
I just did this small piece:

Sometimes you have a very good joke,
it is so good,
that you just can't help saying it,
so you say it
and somehow then
it is a very bad joke.

I did this some hour ago. Now I know more, I see more. I will fight and I will speak. My eyes burn, their flame burns through each single thing surrounding my life as easily as your knife cuts thru your butter. I go to the city and I spot someone left his shoes in the middle of my doormat. I have a poem. I will post it here when I have a while. I go to the mart - I have three poems. I will post one. I eat a pear - I have a poem. Sometimes I just can't step into a poodle without writing a poem about it. You don’t believe me? Here it is:

He said that he just can't step into a poodle without writing a poem
and they did not believe him.

You have these options: -leave this thread -throw me out of the site -stay and listen and say what you think -and whatever option you conceive. Whatever you want. It always is like this throughout the world. I will say something more, maybe much more because as far, I don't feel unwelcome here. If you will show me that I am not welcome here at all, I will leave, no matter that it is arlonet not yournet. Arlo will be very sorry about it, but since he will not know that I ever was here, there at this point there'll be no difference if I leave or not.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 3:32 pm
  

Ha, I did change my mind again. I will not speak. At all, you know. Not only here. Anywhere. I will no longer try to publish my poetry. Nor show it to anyone, except 4 people. You were just the little drop that... don't know the word, there is this something about a drop and a mug. A mug? There is another kind of... Heck I am forgetting my English completely here. Don't you take your drop back, no need really, because there would be more to come, from other places. Or if it is you all just slept too long and you were to give my poetry 50 comments just the next minute. You just made me saw the pattern in its completeness. so I don;t accuse you. To accuse someone, only means to want to make him understand. The pattern is this: I, in the very first place, feel. I see it now and so here is my good bye.


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 7:47 pm
  

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This is my favorite place to post.
I will post things just to piss people off, in fact, the reason that this area was locked up was because Todd Goodman and I were forever slapping one another around in here, okay that and the use of the word fuck. we used it alot. Be it understood that Todd and I were bros and we never really cared which way the discussion went as long as it offended someone.
So I a thinking that the area will onc more be closed but at least this once I get to say, hey Todd it was fun whie it lasted.


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PostPosted: Sat May 23, 2009 9:32 pm
  

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I love your rule ---"don't shoot the poet"!

I love your plea to the sheriff ---"don't shoot the poet". It reminds me of Joseph Brodsky --the great Russian poet--being asked the difference between reading his poems in America vs. reading them in the "Soviet Union". He said in the Soviet Union you read your poems and afterward
someone hit you on the head with a brick. In America you read your poems and you had to go out an get your own brick. I guess we're playing "catchup" to the old Stalin Era.


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 8:04 pm
  

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You have any training in poesy? Ever tried formal work? You got a talent.

It takes a lot to put your work out there for others to see. This is the hardest and the most crucial step to becoming a recognized author.

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Nathen wrote:
This is my favorite place to post.
I will post things just to piss people off, in fact, the reason that this area was locked up was because Todd Goodman and I were forever slapping one another around in here, okay that and the use of the word fuck. we used it alot. Be it understood that Todd and I were bros and we never really cared which way the discussion went as long as it offended someone.
So I a thinking that the area will onc more be closed but at least this once I get to say, hey Todd it was fun whie it lasted.


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Hope he's doing okay...


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I speak with Nathen on occasion and he's doing well... He's on Facebook, too.


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Good to hear. He'll have to dop by here sometime. :)


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